Ember - Bettie Sharpe First the problems:

1. What the heck was up with all the sex? The later sex was okay, but the whole touching herself in a closet! Ewwwwww!!!!

2.The plot was way too simple, I knew who Rian was the moment we meet him.

3.There was nothing interesting, no new major details or story that made me what more, well I wanted more but more good story.

Now the good points are that is wasn't that bad of a story and it was free. Which is the main reason to read it what can you loss by reading a free book?